Inspired by the unprecedented response (hem hem) to my sawn-off haiku encapsulating the Noughties, I've decided to regularise the form and give it a name. It shall be called the Haikette (with grateful acknowledgment to the Sage of Tiverton, whom God preserve), and it shall consist of 13 syllables, arranged thus:
4
6
3
That's enough syllables for anyone. Here's an example:
Gulls on the ice.
Seared rushes fringe the lake.
My breath, smoke.
(It should be centred, rather than ranged left, but I can't work out how to do it on Blogger.)
That's a memory of yesterday, when I walked out in quest of waxwings, not really expecting to find any - and I didn't. That magical sighting from a passing train will stand alone in my memory (albeit with a butterfly relative). I did, however, get a good look at another beautiful tree sparrow, and thought of my daughter, now back in New Zealand...
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Nige, lyrical.
ReplyDeleteButterflies, birds: the cause
Readers smile.
Continuing my current theme...
ReplyDeleteNot with a bang,
But fizzling out on a
slow Tuesday.
Or digging up an old one...
John Portsmouth
Football Club Westwood must
ring his bell.
Beautiful words -
ReplyDeleteCuriosity is
Rewarded:
Here is a kiss...
Thank you for being so
Curious.
x
snow on the road.
ReplyDeletebin men stay warm in pub.
council tax, why?
I have been moved to compose a Haikette in honour of your auspicious posting!
ReplyDeleteSnow on the path.
Empty gritters rumble.
Nothing spreads.
Thanks to you all.
ReplyDeleteI am work-whelmed, alas.
Days too short.
words on a page
ReplyDeletefalling slowly askew
demand thought
Lovely post, Nige.
ReplyDeleteNew Zealand is warmer...
But lacks you.
Aaw Kate...
ReplyDeleteI chanced upon this blog, and was inspired by all your examples to experiment. My first haikette:
ReplyDeleteRed fan flashing
Redstart dips, wheels, flutters.
Feathered flame.