Monday 22 January 2024

A Surprising Sestina, and an Upbeat One

 For some reason, I was reading about the sestina, a verse form created by a troubadour in the twelfth century, when I came across a surprising – and to me new – example of the form (which, classically, consists of six six-line stanzas followed by a three-line envoi, the stanzas not rhyming but repeating the end-words of lines in a fixed order). It's a form that, with all its repetitions, runs surprisingly close to the way people actually speak, so its structure tends to be inconspicuous. The sestina has been put to all sorts of uses – which bring me to the surprising example I stumbled upon. This is by a poet best known for his free-verse writings, John Ashbery (whose name cropped up in the Comments recently), and takes place in the weird cartoon world of Popeye...

Landscape with Farm Implements and Rutabagas

The first of the undecoded messages read: “Popeye sits in thunder,   
Unthought of. From that shoebox of an apartment,
From livid curtain’s hue, a tangram emerges: a country.”
Meanwhile the Sea Hag was relaxing on a green couch: “How pleasant   
To spend one’s vacation en la casa de Popeye,” she scratched
Her cleft chin’s solitary hair. She remembered spinach

And was going to ask Wimpy if he had bought any spinach.   
“M’love,” he intercepted, “the plains are decked out in thunder   
Today, and it shall be as you wish.” He scratched
The part of his head under his hat. The apartment
Seemed to grow smaller. “But what if no pleasant
Inspiration plunge us now to the stars? For this is my country.

Suddenly they remembered how it was cheaper in the country.   
Wimpy was thoughtfully cutting open a number 2 can of spinach   
When the door opened and Swee’pea crept in. “How pleasant!”
But Swee’pea looked morose. A note was pinned to his bib. “Thunder   
And tears are unavailing,” it read. “Henceforth shall Popeye’s apartment   
Be but remembered space, toxic or salubrious, whole or scratched.”

Olive came hurtling through the window; its geraniums scratched
Her long thigh. “I have news!” she gasped. “Popeye, forced as you know to flee the country
One musty gusty evening, by the schemes of his wizened, duplicate father, jealous of the apartment
And all that it contains, myself and spinach
In particular, heaves bolts of loving thunder
At his own astonished becoming, rupturing the pleasant

Arpeggio of our years. No more shall pleasant
Rays of the sun refresh your sense of growing old, nor the scratched   
Tree-trunks and mossy foliage, only immaculate darkness and thunder.”   
She grabbed Swee’pea. “I’m taking the brat to the country.”
“But you can’t do that—he hasn’t even finished his spinach,”   
Urged the Sea Hag, looking fearfully around at the apartment.

But Olive was already out of earshot. Now the apartment
Succumbed to a strange new hush. “Actually it’s quite pleasant
Here,” thought the Sea Hag. “If this is all we need fear from spinach
Then I don’t mind so much. Perhaps we could invite Alice the Goon over”—she scratched
One dug pensively—“but Wimpy is such a country
Bumpkin, always burping like that.” Minute at first, the thunder

Soon filled the apartment. It was domestic thunder,   
The color of spinach. Popeye chuckled and scratched
His balls: it sure was pleasant to spend a day in the country.

[A tangram is a puzzle in which shapes are created from seven flat polygons. The Sea Hag is an ugly witch-like figure who is one of Popeye's main enemies. 'For this is my country' quotes a patriotic song of the 1940s. Alice the Goon has a complicated history. ]

Reading about the sestina, I was reminded that my father – a great Kipling fan – more than once drew my attention to Kipling's very accomplished 'Sestina of the Tramp-Royal'. It's an upbeat piece, in the author's rather tiresome vernacular style, replete with apostrophes of omission, but it's beautifully done – and could hardly be more different from Ashbery's essay in the same form...

Sestina of the Tramp-Royal

Speakin’ in general, I ’ave tried ’em all—
The ’appy roads that take you o’er the world.   
Speakin’ in general, I ’ave found them good   
For such as cannot use one bed too long,   
But must get ’ence, the same as I ’ave done,   
An’ go observin’ matters till they die.

What do it matter where or ’ow we die,
So long as we’ve our ’ealth to watch it all—
The different ways that different things are done,   
An’ men an’ women lovin’ in this world;   
Takin’ our chances as they come along,   
An’ when they ain’t, pretendin’ they are good?

In cash or credit—no, it aren’t no good;   
You ’ave to ’ave the ’abit or you’d die,
Unless you lived your life but one day long,   
Nor didn’t prophesy nor fret at all,
But drew your tucker some’ow from the world,   
An’ never bothered what you might ha’ done.

But, Gawd, what things are they I ’aven’t done?   
I’ve turned my ’and to most, an’ turned it good,   
In various situations round the world—
For ’im that doth not work must surely die;   
But that's no reason man should labour all   
’Is life on one same shift—life’s none so long.

Therefore, from job to job I’ve moved along.   
Pay couldn’t ’old me when my time was done,   
For something in my ’ead upset it all,
Till I ’ad dropped whatever ’twas for good,   
An’, out at sea, be’eld the dock-lights die,
An’ met my mate—the wind that tramps the world!

It’s like a book, I think, this bloomin’ world,   
Which you can read and care for just so long,   
But presently you feel that you will die   
Unless you get the page you’re readin’ done,   
An’ turn another—likely not so good;   
But what you’re after is to turn ’em all.

Gawd bless this world! Whatever she ’ath done—
Excep’ when awful long I’ve found it good.   
So write, before I die, ‘’E liked it all!’



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